[governance] FW: Re: An Attached "Edited" Document

[Michael Gurstein]

Okay, in response to Bill...

> I'm in the process of editing a couple of books, the next issue of the
> Community Informatics journal etc.etc. so I inevitably read with a red
> pencil in my hand.
> 
> What I've done in the attached is edit the statement as I would edit any
> other publication for which I'm responsible--for grammar, redundancy,
> excessive opinionizing etc.etc.
> 
> Thus in the attached are some both editorial and content judgements that
> are generally not very controversial but in some cases are (I have dropped
> most of "opinining" stuff in $3 and the specific's from #6 
> 
I'm sending this along in a marked up and a clear version.

(I'm off -- editing what I should be editing for most of the day.  feel free
to do with this as appropriate.

> Best,
> 
> M
> 
> Michael Gurstein, Ph.D.
> Editor in Chief: The Journal of Community Informatics
> http://ci-journal.net <http://ci-journal.net/> 
> 
> 
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