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<BR><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">Okay, in response to Bill...</FONT>
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<P><FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">I'm in the process of editing a couple of books, the next issue of </FONT><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">the Community Informatics</FONT><FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial"> journal etc.etc. so I inevitably read with a red pencil in my hand.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">What I've done in the attached is edit the statement as I would edit any other publication for which I'm responsible--for grammar, redundancy, excessive opinionizing etc.etc.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">Thus in the attached are some both editorial and content judgements that are generally not very controversial but in some cases are (I have dropped most of </FONT><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">"opinining"</FONT><FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial"> stuff in $3 and </FONT><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">the specific's</FONT> <FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">from #6 </FONT></P>
<P><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">I'm sending this along in a marked up and a clear version…</FONT>
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<P><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">(I'm off -- editing what I should be editing for most of the day… feel free to do with this as appropriate.</FONT>
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<P><FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">Best,</FONT>
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<P><FONT SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">M</FONT>
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<P><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">Michael Gurstein, Ph.D.</FONT>
<BR><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">Editor in Chief: The Journal of Community Informatics</FONT>
<BR><A HREF="http://ci-journal.net/"><U></U><U><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial">http://ci-journal.net</FONT></U></A>
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