[governance] new version of IG part in WSIS CS statement

[Jacqueline Morris]

I lIke McTim's formulation - clearer and neater
Jacqueline
On 11/30/05, McTim <dogwallah at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>
> On 11/30/05, Ralf Bendrath <bendrath at zedat.fu-berlin.de> wrote:
> > Hi all,
> >
> > since I did not get an agreed text from the caucus, I have tried to follow
> > the discussions here. The current version is copied below. Please make my
> > life a bit easier. ;-)
>
>  hero/angel/gentleman/scholar, etc
>
>
>
> > To ensure that Internet governance and development take place in the
> > public interest, it is necessary for people who use the Internet
> > understand how the DNS is functioning, how IP addresses are allocated,
> > what basic legal instruments exist in fields like cyber-crime,
> > Intellectual Property Rights, eCommerce, e-government, and human rights
> > and promoting development.
>
>
>  The above is nonsensical.  It should be two or 3 sentences:
>
>  "To ensure that Internet governance and development take place in the
> public interest, it is necessary for people who use the Internet to
> understand the process of the administration of technical resources.
>
>  Internet users can also benefit from an understanding of the basic legal
> instruments that exist in fields like cyber-crime,Intellectual Property
> Rights, eCommerce, e-government, and human rights.
>
>
>  --
> Cheers,
>
> McTim
> $ whois -h whois.afrinic.net mctim
>
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