[governance] suggested changes to chairs paper, paras 45 and 65

[Danny Younger]

Sorry for being dense, but what infrastructure
technological innovations has CS either fostered or
realized?  Can you point out a couple of examples just
to clarify this point?

--- "Gurstein, Michael" <gurstein at ADM.NJIT.EDU> wrote:

> 
> On reflection CHANGE B would be strengthened--CHANGE
> B+ --by replacing
> "FOSTERING" with "REALIZATION OF"
> 
> 43 c. Civil society has played an important role on
> Internet matters.
> This role has ranged from capacity building at the
> community level, to
> the REALIZATION of technological innovation in
> infrastructure and
> systems, to the creation of much of the content that
> makes the Internet
> what it is today. Civil Society should continue to
> play such a role. 
> 
> MG
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: governance-bounces at lists.cpsr.org
> [mailto:governance-bounces at lists.cpsr.org] On Behalf
> Of Gurstein,
> Michael
> Sent: November 6, 2005 1:43 PM
> To: ajp at glocom.ac.jp; governance at lists.cpsr.org
> Subject: Re: [governance] suggested changes to
> chairs paper, paras 45
> and 65
> 
> 
> >From the perspective of someone who does a lot of
> editing including 
> >some
> experience in a former life of editing for UN-ese
> could I suggest that
> the following paragraph (PROPOSED CHANGE B) would
> scan rather better
> (with I think no change in content) than the one
> being presented
> (PROPOSED CHANGE A)...
> 
> MG
> 
> PROPOSED CHANGE B
> 
> 
> >
>
<http://www.itu.int/wsis/docs2/pc3/contributions/sca/GLOCOM-22.doc>
> 
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: governance-bounces at lists.cpsr.org
> [mailto:governance-bounces at lists.cpsr.org] On Behalf
> Of Adam Peake
> (ajp at glocom.ac.jp)
> Sent: November 6, 2005 1:26 PM
> To: governance at lists.cpsr.org
> Subject: Re: [governance] suggested changes to
> chairs paper, paras 45
> and 65
> 
> EXISTING
> 
> > 45 c) Civil society has also played an important
> role on Internet
> > matters, especially at community level, and should
> continue to play 
> > such a role;
> 
> PROPOSED CHANGE-A
> 
> > 43 c. Civil society has played an important role
> on Internet matters.
> > This role has ranged from capacity building at the
> community level to 
> > the contribution of much of the technological
> innovation and to the 
> > creation of much of the content that makes the
> Internet what it is 
> > today. Civil Society should continue to play such
> a role. 
> >
>
<http://www.itu.int/wsis/docs2/pc3/contributions/sca/GLOCOM-22.doc>
> >
> 
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