[governance] JPA - final draft for comments

Carlos Afonso ca at rits.org.br
Mon Jun 1 10:50:54 EDT 2009


OK. It is "it's" or "its"?? If the first, something is missing to give
meaning to the phrase.

--c.a.

McTim wrote:
> On Mon, Jun 1, 2009 at 5:30 PM, Carlos Afonso <ca at rits.org.br> wrote:
>> McT, I could not grasp one of your suggestions:
> 
> 
>> McTim wrote:
>>> nice one Ian,
>>> My suggested changes below:
>>> [...]
>>>
>>> multistakeholder principle
>>>> which has evolved from
>>> <insert>
>>> the narrow Internet Governance model to it's meaning derived from the
>>>
>>> the World Summit on the Information Society and the
>>>> Internet  Governance Forum process which the US Government has supported,
>>>> and which is  an important facet, we believe, of effective internet
>>>> governance  arrangements. We also speak more about principles in answer to
>>>> your Q7 below.
>> I do not understand what is to be inserted where. As I read it, the
>> phrase to be inserted would be "the narrow Internet Governance model to
>> its [not it's] meaning derived from the..."
>>
>> Please clarify.
> 
> it would read thusly:
> 
> 
> IGC believes these principles are important, and would like to see
> them embedded in the bylaws of an independent ICANN. We would propose
> to
> replace "private sector management" with the
> words "multistakeholder management" which has evolved from the narrow
> Internet Governance model to it's meaning derived from the the World
> Summit on the Information Society and the Internet  Governance Forum
> process which the US Government has supported,
> and which is  an important facet, we believe, of effective internet
> governance arrangements.
> 
> The above acknowledges that there was multistakeholderism b4 WSIS, that's all.
> 
> 

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