[governance] JPA - final draft for comments

[Carlos Afonso]

McT, I could not grasp one of your suggestions:

McTim wrote:
> nice one Ian,
> My suggested changes below:
> [...]
> 
> multistakeholder principle
>> which has evolved from
> 
> <insert>
> the narrow Internet Governance model to it's meaning derived from the
> 
> the World Summit on the Information Society and the
>> Internet  Governance Forum process which the US Government has supported,
>> and which is  an important facet, we believe, of effective internet
>> governance  arrangements. We also speak more about principles in answer to
>> your Q7 below.

I do not understand what is to be inserted where. As I read it, the
phrase to be inserted would be "the narrow Internet Governance model to
its [not it's] meaning derived from the..."

Please clarify.

--c.a.


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