[governance] Call for Consensus on IGC statement to the OC: The

[Milton L Mueller]

I like elements of this statement, but cannot make sense of this sentence:


This framework will continue to emphasize the significant
themes of access to knowledge and development, while adding the important
issues of basic user rights and control to access, content and applications
of their choice, in keeping with current international debates regarding an
"open Internet" and relevant aspects of the often confusing network
neutrality discussions.

Recognizing my late participation in this discussion, is it possible to improve the clarity and grammar of this monster sentence by saying,

"This framework will continue to emphasize the importance of access to knowledge and development in Internet governance, while adding to it the basic right of individuals to access the content and applications of their choice, in keeping with current debates regarding an open Internet and network neutrality discussions."

--MM

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