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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>I like elements of this statement, but
cannot make sense of this sentence:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
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<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:10.0pt'>This framework will continue to emphasize the
significant<br>
themes of access to knowledge and development, while adding the important<br>
issues of basic user rights and control to access, content and applications<br>
of their choice, in keeping with current international debates regarding an<br>
"open Internet" and relevant aspects of the often confusing network<br>
neutrality discussions.<font color=navy><span style='color:navy'><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></font></p>
<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>Recognizing my late
participation in this discussion, is it possible to improve the clarity and
grammar of this monster sentence by saying, <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>“This framework
will continue to emphasize the importance of access to knowledge and development
in Internet governance, while adding to it the basic right of individuals to access
the content and applications of their choice, in keeping with current debates
regarding an open Internet and network neutrality discussions.”<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>--MM<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>“<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
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