[governance] Comments from Bill Drake [attachment]

[William Drake]

Hi,

I attach some additional suggested revisions, comments in bold.  I agree
with Rony Koven on Art. 29, or at least think this needs clarification by
whoever wrote it.  I understand Lee's intention, but suggest dialing back
the praise for the EC slightly.  The question of whether and in what
manner the US should declare its intention not to monkey with the zone
file for political purposes is an interesting one that needs some
discussion, methinks.  Comments in bold.

Best,

Bill

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> [mailto:governance-bounces at lists.cpsr.org]On Behalf Of Lee McKnight
> Sent: Sunday, August 14, 2005 7:09 AM
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> Cc: wdrake at ictsd.ch
> Subject: Re: [governance] Comments from Bill Drake
>
>
> Hi,
>
> Hopefully better late than never, here is my 'politically correct'
> edits of the whole doc, on top of the Adam/Bill edition. You'll note all
> the main points are there, even if did I did little wording changes here
> and there, with the major edits bringing in the EU statement, and
> repositioning that section on the root zone as collectively addressing
> the WGIG report, and the EU and US statements, with praise for all as
> well as ICANN, and also some knocks on all.  If it were possible in the
> remaining hours to include refrences and comments on eg Brazilian,
> Chinese, Indian, African and Latin American comments and views, even
> better, but someone else will have to take a crack at that.
>
> Lee
>
>
>
> Prof. Lee W. McKnight
> School of Information Studies
> Syracuse University
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> >>> apeake at gmail.com 08/13/05 10:46 AM >>>
> Bill is also having email problems, asked me to send his comments.
> Please see attached.
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