[governance] REVISION 4 Draft statement to UNSG on bypassing CSTD
Fearghas McKay
fm-lists at st-kilda.org
Fri Feb 19 05:42:57 EST 2010
On 19 Feb 2010, at 10:30, Deirdre Williams wrote:
> And I am still in favour of cutting up the sentences. These sound
> beautiful, mellifluous, but all of the subordinate clauses impede
> comprehension, especially if there is any question of translation.
>
+1 for sentence chopping.
Regards
f
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