[governance] REVISION 4 Draft statement to UNSG on bypassing CSTD

Fearghas McKay fm-lists at st-kilda.org
Fri Feb 19 05:42:57 EST 2010


On 19 Feb 2010, at 10:30, Deirdre Williams wrote:

> And I am still in favour of cutting up the sentences. These sound  
> beautiful, mellifluous, but all of the subordinate clauses impede  
> comprehension, especially if there is any question of translation.
>

	+1 for sentence chopping.

Regards

	f
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