[governance] JPA - final draft for comments

[Yehuda Katz]

Very nice Ian,

A little tweek here & there;

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Under Response to Question 6: Edit

>Therefore, all of us believe the JPA should be ended as soon as is practical.

Change to:
In this respect,  all of us believe the JPA should be end as soon as these are
satisfide.

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>On the other hand, some of us believe that a short term extension of the JPA
might be the most effective means to ensure that ICANN does take on board
necessary changes.

Change to:
On the other hand, some of us believe that a short term extension of the JPA
might be the most effective means to ensure that ICANN does make necessary
changes via oversite provided under a JPA extention agreement.
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Looks good
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