[governance] FW: Re: An Attached "Edited" Document

[Ginger Paque]

Ok, many thanks. I will post a combined statement shortly for review and 
a call for consensus.



Michael Gurstein wrote:
> No, I haven't looked at Bill's comments at all and I'm about to go out of
> this discussion to do my "real" work...
>
> M
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ginger Paque [mailto:gpaque at gmail.com] 
> Sent: Tuesday, July 14, 2009 10:16 AM
> To: governance at lists.cpsr.org; Michael Gurstein
> Subject: Re: [governance] FW: Re: An Attached "Edited" Document
>
>
> Michael, I am just reading your draft. This is invaluable, and I 
> appreciate it more than i can say...
>
> Does this mean the final draft just sent takes Bill's comments into account?
>
> Michael Gurstein wrote:
>   
>> <<...>> <<...>>
>> Okay, in response to Bill...
>>
>> I'm in the process of editing a couple of books, the next issue of the
>> Community Informatics journal etc.etc. so I inevitably read with a red 
>> pencil in my hand.
>>
>> What I've done in the attached is edit the statement as I would edit
>> any other publication for which I'm responsible--for grammar, 
>> redundancy, excessive opinionizing etc.etc.
>>
>> Thus in the attached are some both editorial and content judgements
>> that are generally not very controversial but in some cases are (I 
>> have dropped most of "opinining" stuff in $3 and the specific's from #6
>>
>> I'm sending this along in a marked up and a clear version.
>>
>> (I'm off -- editing what I should be editing for most of the day. feel
>> free to do with this as appropriate.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> M
>>
>> Michael Gurstein, Ph.D.
>> Editor in Chief: The Journal of Community Informatics 
>> _http://ci-journal.net_ <http://ci-journal.net/>
>>
>>
>>     
>
>
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