[governance] Comments from Bill Drake

[Ian Peter]

Well done Lee, Adam and everyone else! No major problems from my initial
read and some substantial improvements.

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Sent: Sunday, 14 August 2005 3:09 PM
To: ajp at glocom.ac.jp; apeake at gmail.com; governance at lists.cpsr.org
Cc: wdrake at ictsd.ch
Subject: Re: [governance] Comments from Bill Drake

Hi,

Hopefully better late than never, here is my 'politically correct'
edits of the whole doc, on top of the Adam/Bill edition. You'll note all
the main points are there, even if did I did little wording changes here
and there, with the major edits bringing in the EU statement, and
repositioning that section on the root zone as collectively addressing
the WGIG report, and the EU and US statements, with praise for all as
well as ICANN, and also some knocks on all.  If it were possible in the
remaining hours to include refrences and comments on eg Brazilian,
Chinese, Indian, African and Latin American comments and views, even
better, but someone else will have to take a crack at that. 

Lee



Prof. Lee W. McKnight
School of Information Studies
Syracuse University
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>>> apeake at gmail.com 08/13/05 10:46 AM >>>
Bill is also having email problems, asked me to send his comments. 
Please see attached.

Adam

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