[governance] My edits to the draft statement

[Vittorio Bertola]

I am attaching some proposed edits (additions, mostly) to the statement. 
Main ones are: mentioning and supporting the basic architectural 
principles of the Internet; reinforcing the role and participatory rights 
of individual users/netizens; adding a section on privacy and consumer 
rights; strengthening the forum proposal.
On the forum, I've dropped my original text and I've tried to insert a 
call for making the forum effective without going too much in details (so 
no mention about composition, executive group, secretariat etc). However, 
I'm still waiting to hear about how a forum could be effective without a 
secretariat and an executive group :-)
Ciao,
-- 
vb.               [Vittorio Bertola - v.bertola [a] bertola.eu.org]<------
http://bertola.eu.org/  <- Vecchio sito, nuovo toblòg...
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