[bestbits] Re: [governance] IGC press release in response to the NTIA announcement of March 14

[Mawaki Chango]

 Hi Ian,

On Sat, Mar 15, 2014 at 11:15 PM, Ian Peter <ian.peter at ianpeter.com> wrote:

>   Hi Mawaki,
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> good start.
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> I think some sections are repetitive and it may be too long.
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I expected that one.
Will wait till Monday morning to reviews the comments, suggestions or
proposed edits before proposing a new draft.
Thank you,

mC


> So in my thinking I have square bracketed some sections below and also
> have a few in line comments and suggested alternatives
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