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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear colleagues,</p><p class="MsoNormal"><br></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">We received the following comments from the Secretariat.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><br></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes"></span>I recall most of you
didn’t have enough time to support the WG and provide comments at that time;
also, some of you were probably not sure they will be attending the IGF; so,
here the time to add your inputs. Thanks for offering to support.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><br></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif"">Furthermore, please
find below the comments made by the MAG during evaluation to help you further
refine and update your proposal:</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><br><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:
normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""><Improve gender
and geography balance and work on a clear options for remote participation</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:
normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""><br></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""> </span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif"">Missing SDG Goal</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""><br></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""> </span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif"">good subject..</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""><br></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""> </span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif"">if more diversity of
stakeholder group representations would be great.</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""><br></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""> </span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif"">It is not clear what
specific issue this workshop addresses and how various stakehoders can learn
from it.></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0.5in;line-height:normal"><br><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">I am putting together this Google Doc (see link
bellow) to inquire your inputs in forms of answers to the above comments from
the Secretariat. Feel free to add paragraphs, edit, add sections, etc to make
our workshop complete. <br></p><p class="MsoNormal"><br></p><p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1omxSqI2LndwoVsa6DlWODecMOWvKLjpXI-I5QYfev3E/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1omxSqI2LndwoVsa6DlWODecMOWvKLjpXI-I5QYfev3E/edit?usp=sharing</a></p><p class="MsoNormal"><br></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">I will be consolidating comments by <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:
normal">August 20^th</b> at the latest and update our online proposal
in the next days or so.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><br></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Hope to count on you and hope everyone is able to access
Google Docs forms and edit. I encourage more inputs in the text and not simple
comments. Feel free to add new sections, etc to enrich our content (<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal">Note the word count limit</b>).</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><br></p><p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,</p><p class="MsoNormal"><br></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Arsene </p>

<br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div><div>------------------------<br>*<b>Arsène Tungali</b>*<br></div>Co-Founder & Executive Director, <span><i><a href="http://www.rudiinternational.org" target="_blank">Rudi international</a></i>,</span><br>CEO,<i> <a href="http://www.smart-serv.info" target="_blank">Smart Services Sarl</a></i>, <i><a href="http://www.mabingwa-forum.com" target="_blank">Mabingwa Forum</a></i> <br>Tel: +243 993810967<i><br></i></div><div>GPG: 523644A0<i><br></i></div><div><u>Goma, Democratic Republic of Congo</u><i><br><br></i></div><div><a href="http://tungali.blogspot.com/2015/06/selected-for-2015-mandela-washington.html" target="_blank">2015 Mandela Washington Felllow</a> (YALI) - <a href="http://www.internetsociety.org/what-we-do/education-and-leadership-programmes/next-generation-leaders/igf-ambassadors-programme/2015Ambassadors" target="_blank">ISOC IGF Ambassador</a><a href="http://www.internetsociety.org/what-we-do/education-and-leadership-programmes/next-generation-leaders/igf-ambassadors-programme/2015Ambassadors" target="_blank"> </a><font face="monospace,monospace">- <br></font><a href="http://tungali.blogspot.com" target="_blank">Blogger</a> - <a href="https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2014-07-18-en" target="_blank">ICANN Fellow</a>.<i> </i><a href="http://www.huffingtonpost.co.uk/liza-bel/drc_b_8958150.html" target="_blank">The HuffingtonPost UK</a></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div>
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