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<DIV>I don’t know Parminder (and I wasnt aware of that). What I would like to
see is sufficient comments and some suggestions that might provoke a discussion
during the meeting rather than the words quietly being accepted. I suggested
elsewhere perhaps we could call for an immediate cessation of all surveillance
that did not accord with human rights provisions and privacy norms. I would just
like to see which governments put up their hand to oppose an inclusion along
those lines.</DIV>
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<DIV>Ian Peter</DIV>
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<DIV style="font-color: black"><B>From:</B> <A title=parminder@itforchange.net
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<DIV><B>Sent:</B> Thursday, April 17, 2014 11:59 AM</DIV>
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<DIV><B>Subject:</B> Re: [bestbits] Surveillance paragraph of netmundial
document</DIV></DIV></DIV>
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<DIV class=moz-cite-prefix>On Thursday 17 April 2014 04:08 AM, Ian Peter
wrote:<BR></DIV>
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<DIV style="WORD-WRAP: break-word">Hi everyone,</DIV>
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<DIV style="WORD-WRAP: break-word">To me one of the weakest sections of the
document is the paragraph dealing with surveillance issues (para 35 of the
Roadmap) which reads “<SPAN
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face=Arial><FONT color=#ca0000><SPAN
class=Apple-converted-space> </SPAN>Internet surveillance – Mass and
arbitrary surveillance undermines trust in the Internet and trust in the
Internet governance ecosystem. Surveillance of communications, their
interception, and the collection of personal data, including mass
surveillance, interception and collection should be conducted in accordance
with states’ obligations under international human rights law. More dialogue
is needed on this topic at the international level using forums like IGF and
the Human Rights Council aiming to develop a common understanding on all the
related aspects”.</FONT></FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV style="WORD-WRAP: break-word">This fairly weak language and action line
(more dialogue) is not surprising given the governmental input (including US
Government) into the drafting. So far the only comment on this is from me,
where I suggest reference to the necessaryandproportionate.org
principles. </DIV></DIV></DIV></BLOCKQUOTE><BR><BR>You of course know that
reference to 'necessary and proportionate' was there in the original draft and
it got removed... What are the chances then it will be reinstated at your
request?<BR><BR>parminder<BR><BR>
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<DIV style="WORD-WRAP: break-word">I think it would be useful if others
commented as individuals. Perhaps what we need is some better wording (which
perhaps governments would be embarrassed not to include), and which would
strengthen the response here. In any case, some wording and indication of
level of concern to ensure that this is discussed on the floor of the meeting
rather than simply passed by as an adequate wording would be useful!</DIV>
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<DIV style="WORD-WRAP: break-word">Ian Peter</DIV>
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<DIV style="WORD-WRAP: break-word">The site for entering responses is <A
title=http://document.netmundial.br/2-roadmap-for-the-future-evolution-of-the-internet-governance/
href="http://document.netmundial.br/2-roadmap-for-the-future-evolution-of-the-internet-governance/"
moz-do-not-send="true">http://document.netmundial.br/2-roadmap-for-the-future-evolution-of-the-internet-governance/</A></DIV></DIV></DIV></BLOCKQUOTE><BR>
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