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<p>I share mctim's reservation on 19 and 20</p>
<p>--srs (htc one x)<br>
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<p>On 21 October 2013 1:28:21 PM "Salanieta T. Tamanikaiwaimaro"
<salanieta.tamanikaiwaimaro@gmail.com> wrote:</p>
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<div dir="ltr">Dear All,<div><br></div><div>In yesterday's breakfast
chat, we invited the community to give us feedback on their position on the
21 clauses that are extensions of the 10 broad principles produced by the
Internet Principles and Dynamic Coalition. Thank you for those who have
sent their feedback. Kindly advise us whether you support it, have
reservations or object to it. Kindly note that before Day 2 (which is
tomorrow) we would like to have received as much feedback as possible so we
can channel your views through to the Coalition in their Workshop. Please
also put your country in paranthesis.</div>
<div><br></div><div>Marianne Franklin also has alot of booklets (hard
copies of the Principles) and she is happy to give them out for those
wishing to take some back to their communities for further engagement and
discussion or adoption. They are free.<br>
<div>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><b><span
style="font-size:14pt;line-height:115%">IGC Feedback on Internet Principles
and Dynamic
Coalition [ Call for Comments]</span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><font size="4">10 Broad
Principles</font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><b
style><br></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"
style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"></p><ol><li><b
style>Universality</b></li><li><b style><span
style="font-size:7pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'"> </span>Accessibility</b></li>
<li><b style><span
style="font-size:7pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'"> </span>Neutrality</b></li><li><b
style><span
style="font-size:7pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'"> </span>Rights</b></li><li><b
style><span
style="font-size:7pt;font-family:'Times New Roman'"> </span>Expression</b><br>
</li><li><b style>Life, Liberty, and Security</b><br></li><li><b
style>Privacy</b><br></li><li><b style>Diversity</b><br></li><li><b
style>Standards & Regulation</b><br></li><li><b
style>Governance</b><br></li></ol><p>
</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span
style="font-size:9pt;line-height:115%"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt">Source: <a
href="http://internetrightsandprinciples.org/site/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/IRP_booklet_final1.pdf"
target="_blank"><span
style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">http://internetrightsandprinciples.org/site/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/IRP_booklet_final1.pdf</span></a><span
style="font-size:9pt;line-height:115%"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">1.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"><b>Right to Access to
the Internet</b></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Support: Harish Pillay
(Singapore)</span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">2.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"><b>Right to Non-
Discrimination to
Internet Access, Use and Governance</b></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Support: Harish Pillay
(Singapore)</span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">3.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"><b>Right to Liberty and
Security
on the Internet</b></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Support: Harish Pillay
(Singapore)</span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">4.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Right to Development through
the Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">5.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Freedom of Expression and
Information on the Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">6.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Freedom of Religion and
Belief
on the Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">7.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Freedom of Online
Assembly and
Association</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">8.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Right to Privacy on the
Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">9.</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt"> <span class=""> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Right to Digital Data
Protection</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">10.</span></i><span
class=""><span style="font-size:9pt"> </span></span></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"><b>Right to
Education On or About the Internet</b></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:yellow">11.
Right to Culture and Access to
Knowledge on the Internet</span></i></b><b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></b></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">12.</span></i><span
class=""><span style="font-size:9pt"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rights
of Children On the Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">13</span></i><span
class=""><span style="font-size:9pt"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rights
of People with Disabilities and the Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:lime">14.</span></i><span
class=""><span
style="font-size:9pt;background-color:lime"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:lime">Right
to Work and the Internet</span></i></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Reservation: McTim
(US)</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">15.</span></i><span
class=""><span style="font-size:9pt"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rights
to Online Participation in Public Affairs</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">16.</span></i><span
class=""><span style="font-size:9pt"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Rights
to Consumer Protection on the Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:lime">17.</span></i><span
class=""><span
style="font-size:9pt;background-color:lime"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:lime">Rights
to Health and Social Services on the
Internet</span></i></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Reservation: McTim
(US)</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">18.</span></i><span
class=""><span style="font-size:9pt"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Right to
Legal Remedy and Fair Trial for Actions Involving the
Internet</span></i></b><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:lime">19</span></i><span
class=""><span
style="font-size:9pt;background-color:lime"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:lime">Right
to Appropriate Social and
International Order for the Internet</span></i></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Reservation: McTim
(US)</span><span style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:aqua">20.</span></i><span
class=""><span
style="font-size:9pt;background-color:aqua"> </span></span><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;background-color:aqua">Duties
and Responsibilities of the Internet</span></i></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></i></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Objection: McTim
(US)</span></i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>
<p style="background-repeat:initial initial"><b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">21.</span></i><span
class=""><span style="font-size:9pt"> </span></span></b><i><span
style="font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"><b>General
Clauses</b></span></i></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><u>Additional
Comments</u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt">[Harish
Pillay]:</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span
style="font-size:8pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">I can
see the value of three separately stated rights, but I am
curious</span><span style="font-size:8pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"><br>
<span style="background-repeat:initial initial">as to the downside of
listing them all in one or
for that matter subparts</span><br>
<span style="background-repeat:initial initial">of 1 like 1a), 1b) and
1c).</span></span><span
style="font-size:8pt;font-family:'Times New Roman',serif"></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12pt"><span
style="font-size:8pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(80,0,80)"><br>
> 4. Right to Development through the Internet<br>
><br>
> 5. Freedom of Expression and Information on the Internet<br>
><br>
> 6. Freedom of Religion and Belief on the Internet<br>
><br>
> 7. Freedom of Online Assembly and Association<br>
><br>
> 8. Right to Privacy on the Internet<br>
><br>
> 9. Right to Digital Data Protection</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span
style="font-size:8pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">Shouldn't
8 and 9 be placed with 1-4?</span><span
style="font-size:8pt;font-family:'Times New Roman',serif"></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span
style="font-size:8pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(80,0,80)"><br>
> 10. Right to Education On or About the Internet<br>
><br>
> 11. Rights of Children On the Internet<br>
><br>
> 12. Rights of People with Disabilities and the Internet<br>
><br>
> 13. Right to Work and the Internet<br>
><br>
> 14. Rights to Online Participation in Public Affairs<br>
><br>
> 15. Rights to Consumer Protection on the Internet<br>
><br>
> 16. Rights to Health and Social Services on the Internet</span><span
style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(80,0,80)"><br>
><br>
</span><span
style="font-size:8pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(80,0,80)">>
17. Right to
Legal Remedy and Fair Trial for Actions Involving the Internet<br>
><br>
> 18. Right to Appropriate Social and International Order for the
Internet<br>
><br>
> 19. Duties and Responsibilities of the Internet<br>
></span></p>
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style="font-size:8pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(80,0,80)"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span
style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(80,0,80)"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt">[John
Curran]:</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span
style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">FYI, pdf has a #11 re
culture, which your list below does not.</span></p>
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style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span
style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">(i.e. 21 total in the
pdf, not 20)</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt">Editor’s
Note: Thank you John for highlighting the mistake. This has been corrected
accordingly. <span style="font-family:Wingdings">J</span></p></div></div></div>
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