<div dir="ltr"><div>Agree with Ian. This parag is all that matters.<br></div><br>Louis<br>- - -<br><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Sep 26, 2013 at 2:03 AM, Ian Peter <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:ian.peter@ianpeter.com" target="_blank">ian.peter@ianpeter.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
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<div>Ive just looked again at this and it is getting longer and at the same time
worse.</div>
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<div>I think it needs a very substantial edit. Any more than two paragraphs and
the chance of it being read is meagre.</div>
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<div>To be honest, I think no more than this is necessary. – the first
paragraph</div>
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<div><font face="Courier New"><font style><font size="+0"><span><font size="+0"><font style="FONT-SIZE:9pt">We, the undersigned organizations and
individuals from around the world</font></font></span><font style="FONT-SIZE:9pt"><span><font>,
committed to the development of the Internet</font></span><span><font><span> </span>and its use for advancing social
justice</font></span><span><font>,
would like to express our strong support<span> </span></font></span><span><font>f</font></span><span><font>o</font></span><span><font>r</font></span><span><font><span> </span>the statement delivered this week by
your<span> </span></font></span><span><font>E</font></span><span><font>xcellency<span> </span></font></span><span><font>at
the 68th Session of</font></span></font></font><span><font style="FONT-SIZE:9pt"><font><font><span> </span>the United Nations General
Assembly.</font> </font></font></span></font></font></div>
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<div><font style face="Courier New"><span>(reference
the speech if you wish for those who would like to read more, but dont repeat
it, interpret it, and elaborate on it).</span></font></div>
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<div><font style face="Courier New"><span>And
specifically I dont think we need to talk post Snowden, and demand apologies
from the USA. That ain’t going to happen.</span></font></div>
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<div><font style face="Courier New"><span>Ian
Peter</span></font></div>
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