<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div><div>On 14/06/2013, at 7:48 AM, Kevin Bankston <<a href="mailto:kbankston@cdt.org">kbankston@cdt.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div>A few typos:</div><div><br></div>Paragraph 4 includes the sentence "That was clearly not the case with the latest practices of the US
Government (this is inconsistent with references to “allegations” above)" I assume we want to cut the parenthetical. To address the comment in the parenthetical, perhaps change "clearly" to "apparently"?<div><br></div><div>Paragraph 5: "detailed" is misspelled "detailsed"</div><div><br></div><div>Paragraph 6 begins and ends with quotation marks that need to be deleted. The phrase "which constitute an almost certainly human rights violations" should be "which constitutes an almost certain human rights violation". </div></div></blockquote><br></div><div>Fixed, and I also linked between this letter and the last one to the UN Human Rights Council.</div><br><div>
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