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    <font face="Verdana">Jeremy<br>
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      Sorry, saw your email after I sent my amendments to Ian's text.
      But i think the amendments address all your concerns. We do not
      elevate design principles to any transcedent moral value but such
      principles 'should' be derived through due democratic processes.
      Also they do not automatically get considered as enhancing
      commons/ public good character of the Internet but 'must' aim at
      doing so.<br>
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      The text as amended by me is as follows<br>
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    <font face="Verdana"><b>"We recognise the Internet to be a global
        network of networks comprised of computing devices and
        processes, and an emergent and emerging social reality. In that
        sense, it is an intricate combination of hardware, software,
        protocols, and human intentionality enabling new kinds of social
        interactions and transactions, brought together by a common set
        of design principles. The design principles and policies that
        constitute its governance {should be derived through due
        democratic processes, and must} aim at preserving and enhancing
        the global commons and global public good character of the
        Internet the combination of which has made previous innovations
        possible. Therefore, in the face of the growing danger for the
        Internet experience to be reduced to closed or proprietary
        online spaces, we urge the preservation and enhancement of the
        Internet's global commons and public good dimensions."<br>
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        parminder <br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On Wednesday 24 April 2013 06:44 AM,
      Jeremy Malcolm wrote:<br>
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        <div>On 24/04/2013, at 8:02 AM, Ian Peter <<a
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                      "><b>We recognise the Internet to be a global
                        network of networks comprised of computing
                        devices and processes, and an emergent and
                        emerging social reality. In that sense, it is an
                        intricate combination of hardware, software,
                        protocols, and human intentionality enabling new
                        kinds of social interactions and transactions,
                        brought together by a common set of design
                        principles.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b>The
                          design principles and policies that constitute
                          its governance aim at preserving and enhancing
                          the global commons and global public good
                          character of the Internet the combination of
                          which has made previous innovations possible.
                          Therefore, in the face of the growing danger
                          for the Internet experience to be reduced to
                          closed or<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b></b><b>proprietary
                        online spaces, we urge the preservation and
                        enhancement of the Internet's global commons and
                        public good dimensions.</b></div>
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      <div>Sorry to bring this up late, but I don't like the
        reductionist definition of Internet governance that is implicit
        in the mention of its design principles and policies.  The
        design principles of the Internet have no transcendent moral
        value of their own, they are just technical choices which do
        not, in themselves, have any legitimacy that we can convincingly
        justify.  As Milton pointed out, the IETF is not a democracy,
        it's a meritocracy.  More broadly, the Internet's design
        principles are not justifiable as an outcome of any democratic
        (still less globally democratic) process.</div>
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      Mostly those choices are favourable for our underlying values such
      as freedom of expression and (less often) privacy, but
      sometimes they are not.  So we cannot elevate the design
      principles of the Internet to such a privileged position, when if
      different technical choices had been made in the beginning some of
      the Internet's acknowledged problems that exist today (spam,
      phishing, etc) could have been less.  The Internet's design
      principles may be good for advancing particular policies, but they
      may also be bad, or they may be indifferent.  I don't think that
      those principles can be said to "aim" at anything in particular,
      other than technical soundness, nor that they can sensibly be
      described as a "common set".
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