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<font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Dear Izumi,<br>
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Thanks for this. Just two comments, as below.<br>
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On Monday 16 April 2012 06:21 PM, Izumi AIZU wrote:
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<pre wrap="">Thanks Ginger, and you are right, so I tried the following for the Question 2.
Your suggestions and changes are very much welcome, only three more days left.
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Question 2: Please provide a concise description of the proposed workshop.
IGF is now in the second phase and certain “improvements” are mandated
by the UN Secretary General. </pre>
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A small correction. The improvements were mandated by the UN GA and not
the SG.<br>
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While some governments are calling for tighter control of the
Internet, </pre>
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This is a loaded and one-sided statement. I am not saying that you
meant it that way, but it does get used as a code phrase for a general
accusation against developing countires which is either not
well-informed and balanced or is deliberately mis-leading. Either
remove it, or add the following
to balance it (additions marked in in bold)...<br>
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<pre wrap=""><big><font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">While some governments are calling for tighter control of the Internet, <b>others are seeking to manage it in partisan interests through big business based or plurilateral mechanisms,</b>.....
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Thanks, parminder<br>
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<pre wrap="">how the actual “improved” IGF remain relevant will be the
central focus of this workshop.
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2012/4/12 Ginger Paque <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gpaque@gmail.com"><gpaque@gmail.com></a>:
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<pre wrap="">It looks great, but note that the online form requires a 'concise
description' of at least 200 words.
I am very interested in this discussion!
Cheers, Ginger
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