<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">On 11/11/2010, at 12:23 AM, Paul Lehto wrote:<br><br><blockquote type="cite">In my view, this is the context or close to the preamble that sets the<br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite">stage for understanding all the rest, and something very close to it<br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite">should be at or near the beginning:<br></blockquote><br>This is good, but I don't know whether adding it will cause the reader's eyes to glaze over before they get to the guts of our statement. There's an internet meme called "tl;dr" which I think could apply if we add too much length to the preamble. Also, I feel that most readers (or the ones who matter) will be well aware of this background. What do others think? Maybe if you could just suggest some much shorter additions/changes to the existing text, it would be easier to fit in.<br><div>
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