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<DIV>This is about the language we want to be using when drafting that statement. It is not a stray. Many say "it is not what you say but how you say it". What the very respectful interchange is about is the parameters of the "language" we use. We are striving to show some light on the issue of making a statement internationally internet literate at the highest level --- the level that does the most good for the most, for there is no nobler purpose in governance.</DIV>
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<DIV>This is also about inclusiveness at the most basic level. For if we invite the masses but speak only to the elite, who do we fool but ourselves. We also often hear "people judge you by the words you use". It is important that we not sound haughty and snobbish, while it is important that we do not sacrifice specificity and exactness for simplicity.</DIV>
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<DIV>So I believe if we are to argue a process that does not bypass the CSTD we must not use language that bypasses that same society by arrogance on the one hand and inaccuracy on the other.<BR><BR>--- On <B>Tue, 2/23/10, Deirdre Williams <I><williams.deirdre@gmail.com></I></B> wrote:<BR></DIV>
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<DIV id=yiv1756601271>We seem to have strayed away from the point of this statement. Originally it was simply to express the concern of this group over the apparent proposed change in procedure for presentation and consideration of the statement of the United Nations Secretary General on the future of the Internet Governance Forum. This concern was also expressed by several governments at the recent open consultation in Geneva.
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<DIV>Certainly something that is "incomprehesible" would not be sophisticated. And language should be used in a way as to be understood by the intended recipient.</DIV>
<DIV>And if all we were talking about was the language that was used we would not be talking.</DIV>
<DIV>But some thoughts and concepts are more sophisticated than others. I most assuredly am using sophisticated here in the sense of complex and multidisciplined. Not as any measure of "place in society".</DIV>
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<DIV>Some technical jargon used in sociology is difficult to understand for "most" people. Some telecommunications engineering jargon is difficult for "most" people --- regardless of mother language. Constitutional and inherint rights are not simple concepts. </DIV>
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<DIV>So now for folks to say "keep it simple stupid" when dealing with the above we have a problem. One does not use futbal jargon to make cogent statements regarding inalienable rights - maybe metaphors as Jesus used them,, but not as a replacement for highly complicated words describing highly complicated issues. It is rude for me to expect highly trained computer engineering doctorates to bring themselve down to my level when discussing technical addressing protocal issues. Likewise if they do not grasp nomanklatura and propaganda and marketing and subliminal social messaging I should not have to speak at their level,,,,, but alas if they are my target audience I will in order to persuade them or educate them.</DIV>
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<DIV>My main point is that we should not turn our backs on complicated ideas simply because some will not understand the complicated language that is used to discuss them.<BR><BR>--- On <B>Mon, 2/22/10, Sivasubramanian Muthusamy <I><<A href="http://us.mc839.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=isolatedn@gmail.com" target=_blank rel=nofollow ymailto="mailto:isolatedn@gmail.com">isolatedn@gmail.com</A>></I></B> wrote:<BR></DIV>
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<DIV class=gmail_quote>On Mon, Feb 22, 2010 at 1:59 AM, Eric Dierker <SPAN dir=ltr><<A href="http://us.mc839.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=cogitoergosum@sbcglobal.net" target=_blank rel=nofollow>cogitoergosum@sbcglobal.net</A>></SPAN> wrote:<BR>
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<DIV>I think we agree on this. I think we can both agree that writing in a style most easily undersood by all is optimum. Where we differ here, and not so much, is that when speaking to somebody we make sure that all listeners are easily accomodated. That probably is not such a good idea. If the paper be for all to learn from,,, then write it one way. But if the paper be written so that a leader is pursuaded or influenced then write it for that reader/leader and that purpose.</DIV>
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<DIV>If we are attempting to garner broad support for our position your technique and considerations would be at forefront. In that our stated purpose is more focused on the Sec Gen then perhaps my thoughts should overshadow inclusiveness. If it be your scenario then we are "grandstanding" and "playing for the crowds".</DIV></TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE></BLOCKQUOTE>
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<DIV><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12px; COLOR: rgb(80,0,80); FONT-FAMILY: arial, sans-serif">I don't agree that proper respect requires a language of "sophistication" (sophistication in the sense that the language is complex, incomprehensible to most of the CS participants). The language can be respectful while being simple. It would be a stereotype to assume that polite and formal communication ought to be 'sophisticated', (constructed in long sentences of relatively unintelligible words?). It can very much be a communication in short sentences and plain simple words and still radiate respect.</SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12px; COLOR: rgb(80,0,80); FONT-FAMILY: arial, sans-serif">Another perceived problem is that of the difficulty for those who don't speak English. Since it is a very important document from IGC, we can internally translate this one page document in a few other languages within a week after sending this document in English and make it available on the list for reference as also send it the to the UN to be included along with the document in English in their records.</SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV>I think better we do not say one thing and act another.
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt">I cannot accept an argument that measures greatest and least on the basis of whether people speak English or not. And I believe in communication courtesy – an obligation on the speaker to make his/her point as clearly as possible concomitant with an obligation on the listener to make the effort necessary to understand. </SPAN><BR></DIV></DIV>
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<DIV>In all aspects of communication respect is a two way street. If the document is being drafted for the eyes of a very sophisticated person of high intelligence and education then proper respect requires that the language be of intelligence and sophistication.</DIV>
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<DIV>Too often in civil societies we are concerned about the least amoung us and are not likewise concerned of the greatest amoung us. It is of no help to lower standards so that those of lower standards are included. It is far better to set sights on raising the bar for all rather than lowering it to be seen politically correct.<BR><BR>--- On <B>Sun, 2/21/10, Deirdre Williams <I><<A href="http://us.mc839.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=williams.deirdre@gmail.com" target=_blank rel=nofollow>williams.deirdre@gmail.com</A>></I></B> wrote:<BR></DIV>
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<DIV>My point too. If we expect others to respect the diversity of languages used by civil society and generally online, then we need to be seen to be offering that respect ourselves.
<DIV>And I expect we would also like to be clearly understood by everyone, no matter which language they may feel comfortable in.</DIV>
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<DIV class=gmail_quote>On 21 February 2010 09:22, Fearghas McKay <SPAN dir=ltr><<A href="http://us.mc839.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=fm-lists@st-kilda.org" target=_blank rel=nofollow>fm-lists@st-kilda.org</A>></SPAN> wrote:<BR>
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<BLOCKQUOTE class=gmail_quote style="PADDING-LEFT: 1ex; MARGIN: 0px 0px 0px 0.8ex; BORDER-LEFT: #ccc 1px solid">How many Civil Society statements are drafted and sent to the Secretary General on this issue? Why are we so worried about the length of the statement when it is not verbose by any standards and when there aren't too many statements from Civil Society on this issue? The IGC is making this statement on behalf of most of its several CS members, so it is ok if the statement is long enough to include the facts, arguments and express all our concerns.<BR><BR>Brevity without sufficient reason is unnecessary and would leave so much unsaid.<BR></BLOCKQUOTE><BR></DIV>I am not arguing for reducing the size of the statement in total, just that the sentences are too long and complex.<BR><BR>Breaking them up will make the document longer whilst making it easier to comprehend and translate accurately.
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