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<p class=MsoNormal><st1:City w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on"><font size=2
  color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;
  color:navy'>Milton</span></font></st1:place></st1:City><font size=2
color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:navy'>, I think we can improve the grammar and expression, but at this late
stage I am not happy to change the sense of the mentioning of net neutrality,
which was a compromise between those who don’t want it there at all and
those who think we must include it. It must stay with the “relevant aspects
of net neutrality only” reference and I think the sense of the discussion
that led to the statement supports that. That wording has been carefully
negotiated between interested parties.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>Taking into account Lee’s reference
as well, what I am happy to amend the paragraph to is<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>

<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>“This framework
will continue to emphasize the importance of access to knowledge and
development in Internet governance, while adding to it the basic right of
individuals to access the content and applications of their choice. This is in
keeping with current debates regarding an “open Internet”, and relevant
aspects of the often confusing network neutrality discussions.”<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>And at this late stage I think we should
leave it at that.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=3 color=navy face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;color:navy'>Ian Peter<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><st1:address w:st="on"><st1:Street w:st="on"><font size=3
  color=navy face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt;color:navy'>PO
  Box</span></font></st1:Street><font color=navy><span style='color:navy'> 429</span></font></st1:address><font
color=navy><span style='color:navy'><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=3 color=navy face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;color:navy'>Bangalow NSW 2479<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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color=navy><span style='color:navy'><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=3 color=navy face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;color:navy'>Tel (+614) 1966 7772 or (+612) 6687 0773<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=3 color=navy face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;color:navy'>www.ianpeter.com<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><b><font size=2 face=Tahoma><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Tahoma;font-weight:bold'>From:</span></font></b><font size=2
face=Tahoma><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma'> Milton L Mueller
[mailto:mueller@syr.edu] <br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>Sent:</span></b> 19 February 2009 00:19<br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>To:</span></b> <st1:PersonName w:st="on">governance@lists.cpsr.org</st1:PersonName>;
<st1:PersonName w:st="on">Lee W McKnight</st1:PersonName>; Ginger Paque; Ian
Peter<br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>Subject:</span></b> RE: [governance] Call for
Consensus on IGC statement to the OC: The</span></font><o:p></o:p></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>I like elements of this statement, but
cannot make sense of this sentence:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>

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<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:10.0pt'>This framework will continue to emphasize the
significant<br>
themes of access to knowledge and development, while adding the important<br>
issues of basic user rights and control to access, content and applications<br>
of their choice, in keeping with current international debates regarding an<br>
"open Internet" and relevant aspects of the often confusing network<br>
neutrality discussions.<font color=navy><span style='color:navy'><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></font></p>

<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>Recognizing my late
participation in this discussion, is it possible to improve the clarity and
grammar of this monster sentence by saying, <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>“This framework
will continue to emphasize the importance of access to knowledge and
development in Internet governance, while adding to it the basic right of
individuals to access the content and applications of their choice, in keeping
with current debates regarding an open Internet and network neutrality
discussions.”<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>--MM<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'>“<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><font size=2 color=navy face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:navy'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>

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