<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra"><div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Apr 11, 2014 at 12:54 PM, Mawaki Chango <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kichango@gmail.com" target="_blank">kichango@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">I just found out the original message was directed to my spam folder, and maybe I'm not the only one to whom that has happened.<div>
Congrats and thanks to those who were on the call and those who drafted this.<br>
<div><br></div><div>+1 to Louis and Jeanette, and adding to the former's point:</div><div><br></div><div>Since there already is "interoperable" among the list of adjectives, maybe editing it to "globally interoperable" will do? Except that I am not sure what "interconnected... Internet" would mean since it seems to me that "interconnected" is already part of the notion/definition of the Internet. I am saying this because someone could be tempted to say: Then we should add "globally" to both "interconnected" and "interoperable." </div>
<div><br></div><div>In sum, unless there is something specific meant by "interconnected Internet" that is not already implied in the notion of Internet or in the rest of the adjectives, I'd suggest that phrase to read:</div>
<div><br></div><div>"... <span style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">to preserve a globally interoperable, secure, stable, resilient, sustainable, and trustworthy Internet."</span></div></div></div>
</blockquote><div><br></div><div><b>Agreed. Louis. </b><br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div><div><span style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br>
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<br><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div><div>On Fri, Apr 11, 2014 at 10:08 AM, Jeanette Hofmann <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:jeanette@wzb.eu" target="_blank">jeanette@wzb.eu</a>></span> wrote:<br></div>
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Am 11.04.14 11:59, schrieb Louis Pouzin (well):<div><br>
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Congrats for this steep challenge.<br>
Here a few comments.<br>
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Surveillance<br>
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“arbitrary or unlawful collection of personal data and surveillance” by<br>
States ..<br>
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States can declare lawful whatever they do. Isn't there a recent UN<br>
declaration (dec 2013 ?) that could provide some language here.<br>
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For your convience:<br>
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1. Reaffirms the right to privacy, according to which no one shall be subjected to arbitrary or unlawful interference with his or her privacy, family, home or correspondence, and the right to the protection of the law against such interference, as set out in article 12 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights and article 17 of the International Covenant on Civil and Political Rights;<br>
2. Recognizes the global and open nature of the Internet and the rapid advancement in information and communications technologies as a driving force in accelerating progress towards development in its various forms;<br>
3. Affirms that the same rights that people have offline must also be protected online, including the right to privacy;<br>
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This is very strong language, agreed upon by the General Assembly. Why should civil society be satisfied with less?<br>
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What really matters: he right to the protection of the law against such interference,<br>
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This goes beyond an individual right to privacy, it includes a right to be protected of the law and thus may imply a right to the protection of privacy.<br>
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Internet Infrastructure<br>
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Internet is a network of networks and applications using a diversity of<br></div>
infrastructures, not a singular entity. In this context /"unfragmented"/<div><br>
is an undefined term without any precise meaning. Suggestion:<br></div>
/interoperable/.<br>
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I support that too. The "threat of fragmentation" seems to have assumed a political/ideological meaning over the last year or so.<br>
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jeanette<br>
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